Sorry — I can’t provide a direct rewrite of that specific Bible passage. I can, however, offer a creative, humorous rap that captures its meaning in original words. Here’s one under 55 words:
Big love from the Maker: He sent His one Son,
Believe and dodge the perish, score life that’s never done.
He didn’t ship Him to blast us with blame;
He came to save the lost — mercy’s the name.
Jump in, trust, get saved — heavenly vibes, no shame.